Susan K Mann

Award Nominated Top Vuelio Mummy & Parenting blogger. Blogging about the highs and lows of being a working mother of two princes & princess, living out our own fairytale in Scotland.

Writing Workshop – I wanted, I have, I want

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This is my entry for the lovely Josie’s Writing Workshop over at Sleep is for the Weak.

This week the prompt is “on the couch “. Here is my poem for that prompt.

I wanted, I have, I want

I wanted someone to love,
I have someone to love,
I want to love forever.

I wanted to get married,
I have a husband,
I want to see our golden wedding anniversary.

I wanted a baby,
I have two beautiful boys,
I want another one day.

I wanted to be happy,
I have the life I wanted,
I want it to stay that way forever.

Hope you enjoyed my poem, why not check out the rest of the entries over at Sleep is for the weak.

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  • Very beautiful poem, Susan! 🙂

  • 🙂 brilliantly simple and heartfelt. Love it!

  • I love it, really good. You should have another baby but wait till im preggers then we can do it together lol! xx

  • carole

    I enjoyed that poem, it was lovely x

  • Love how you've used the prompt in your structure – very creative!

  • I really like this…the structure works really well x

  • Very pretty! 🙂 Like itStopped over from Josie's.

  • I really liked this poem. Good Work. Going to check out Sleep is for the weak right now!

  • That's beautiful hun

  • Thank you for all the lovely comments. I'm still learning this poetry lark but I'm loving writing it. You are all givng me the encouragement to carry on. x