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Writing Workshop – Frist Kiss

19th August 2010 By Susan Mann 4 Comments

This is my entry for the lovely Josie’s Writing Workshop over at Sleep is for the Weak.
I went with the prompt “Tell a story of a first kiss.” I’m going for another poem, not sure how to tell a story via poetry or I suppose they are all little stories in their own right. Here goes. Hope you enjoy….
First Kiss
Standing face to face,
Our eyes lock,
Our heads tilt before the embrace,
The butterflies in my stomach flap intensely,
The anticipation of what is to become overwhelms me,
The hairs at the back of my neck start to tingle,
We move closer,
I feel your breath on my lips,
A shiver goes down my spine,
Our lips touch,
And the butterflies become bats,
The tingling becomes electrified,
Our kiss becomes more intense,
I intertwine my fingers in your hair,
Our breathing becomes faster, becomes one,

Then its over, WOW…

Hope you enjoyed my poem, why not check out the rest of the entries over at Sleep is for the weak.
This post is protected under copyright. SusankMann 2009 – 2014

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  1. Tarunita says

    19th August 2010 at 3:03 pm

    Loved the way you expressed it in words…Thanks for sharing <a href="http://.http://dwivedi2326.blogspot.com/2010/08/luckyare-we.htmlhttp://dwivedi2326.blogspot.com/2010/08/headed-towards-destruction.html” target=”_blank”>.http://dwivedi2326.blogspot.com/2010/08/luckyare-we.htmlhttp://dwivedi2326.blogspot.com/2010/08/headed-towards-destruction.html

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  2. Livi says

    19th August 2010 at 8:13 pm

    Feel free to kiss me any time!

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  3. Kerry says

    19th August 2010 at 11:06 pm

    This is a great poem, you have really captured the feelings of a first kiss. Wonderful xx

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  4. emmylou says

    22nd August 2010 at 6:58 pm

    Wow indeed…this is a wonderful poem, I loved it xx

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